just a study of the chief. i've tried to the feel of new mombasa from the game, halo2, trying to emphasize heat and tension.
i think ive succeeded on the whole! im chuffed cos it took less than 20 hours and is over 5000 pixels wide. i feel like im beginning to get the hang of workin textures aswell!!
your opinions are important, so please critique! (and yes i know the composition is a bit flat)
Awesome, man. That looks really good! Congradulations.
If there was one thing I would change (if it were mine, and it was possible), it would be to make the Chief's posture a little more relaxed, as if sniping was the most natural thing to him in the world, and capping elites was as easy as slicing butter with a hot knife. He looks a little too upright and tense, but that could be the feeling you were trying to convey anyway.
I it is a great composition and as Halo is one of my favorite games I like the subject. I think a cast shadow of the chief on the back wall would give the image depth. Also as this is a loose composition, I am sure things like metal shine etc are not in here for that reason.
Very nice job, since you wanted some help I'll let you know what I think could be improved (even though I think this is a kick-ass image)
A little more definition along the back of Master Cheif (like you said yourself, it seems a little flat)
Make the head a little more like a circle rather then an oval like it is now
Don't make the smoke seems "attached" to the barrel, make it seems like its already in the wind (depending on the shot, it looks like he's already fired a round because of the "flash" from the gun but it doesn't seem like he's moved at all becuase of the recoil, is this an in-action shot [like a picture taken just as the bullet is leaving the gun] or a still after shot?)
And the biggest problem that you have is...YOU AREN'T PRODUCING ENOUGH!! This was a beautiful piece and we really want to see more ^______________^
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That shoulder plate looks a bit off, and I think his visor is longer vertically... Aside from that, there's nothing I can pick out without having to dig up screenshots.
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If there was one thing I would change (if it were mine, and it was possible), it would be to make the Chief's posture a little more relaxed, as if sniping was the most natural thing to him in the world, and capping elites was as easy as slicing butter with a hot knife. He looks a little too upright and tense, but that could be the feeling you were trying to convey anyway.
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My only problem is the title, I keep reading it as Masterchef......
A little more definition along the back of Master Cheif (like you said yourself, it seems a little flat)
Make the head a little more like a circle rather then an oval like it is now
Don't make the smoke seems "attached" to the barrel, make it seems like its already in the wind (depending on the shot, it looks like he's already fired a round because of the "flash" from the gun but it doesn't seem like he's moved at all becuase of the recoil, is this an in-action shot [like a picture taken just as the bullet is leaving the gun] or a still after shot?)
And the biggest problem that you have is...YOU AREN'T PRODUCING ENOUGH!! This was a beautiful piece and we really want to see more ^______________^
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MY BIRTHDAY IS SEPTEMBER 20TH WISH ME A HAPPY-FREAKING-BIRTHDAY
Creator and Director of the up coming anime Requiem 366
Lovely work with texture and light - fabulous!
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